🎬 FILM REVIEW — MODEL ESPY RESPONSES

⭐ Strengths: “Ask a lot of whys” is a memorable PM one-liner! Her board game designed for blind and sighted players anchors an excellent ESPY narrative, while her upbeat energy makes her feel like someone you'd genuinely want on your team.

🎯 Next Rep: Dial back the animation slightly to balance enthusiasm with polish. An excellent overall response!

⭐ Strengths: A welcoming smile and thoughtful thank-you set an excellent tone. Her film and media studies background creates a memorable IB exposure story through Netflix’s bid for Warner Bros., complemented by natural pacing and delivery.

🎯 Next Rep: Maintain stronger eye contact. Frequent downward glances suggest reliance on notes, distracting from an otherwise A+ response.

⭐ Strengths: A natural smile and strong ESPY structure connect her computer science background with a passion for collaborative problem-solving. Her idea for a student-athlete finance tracking app provides a concrete, personal example of why PM fits her interests.

🎯 Next Rep: Preserve this natural delivery while sharpening the connection between her app-building experience and the PM role.

⭐ Strengths: A warm greeting and genuine excitement create an engaging first impression. His clearly numbered three reasons for pursuing IB demonstrate excellent structure and intentional storytelling.

🎯 Next Rep: Slow down during the opening. Once he finds his rhythm, his confidence shines through!

⭐ Strengths: An effortless, conversational delivery feels like a genuine interaction rather than a rehearsed script. Her occasional upward glances reinforce that natural, thoughtful presence.

🎯 Next Rep: Reference Sales & Trading or Markets directly instead of saying “this industry” to demonstrate clearer career focus.

⭐ Strengths: A professional, unhurried delivery connects his experience owning his career as a professional tennis player to the autonomy and challenges of PM. His robotics experience evaluating software to digitize workflows provides a highly tailored personal commitment.

🎯 Next Rep: Continue leveraging this distinctive combination of athletic ownership and technical experience. An excellent, well-positioned response!

⭐ Strengths: Incredible poise and command from the opening, paired with a warm smile and top-notch professionalism. Her passion for breaking down complex financial problems creates a strong ESPY.

🎯 Next Rep: A brief stumble around the one-minute mark slightly interrupts an otherwise excellent delivery. Continued practice will help.

⭐ Strengths: A polished, conversational response anchored by his early exposure to IB at Phillips Exeter. Strong eye contact and a natural tone reinforce his professionalism throughout.

🎯 Next Rep: Reduce the repeated use of “you know” to sharpen an already confident delivery. A minor adjustment!

⭐ Strengths: Excellent pacing and a thoughtful transition from engineering toward more collaborative, client-centered work. Her Scholars of Finance involvement and Wall Street Journal reading establish credible exposure to IB.

🎯 Next Rep: Introduce more natural vocal variation to make the delivery feel less scripted and more conversational.

⭐ Strengths: Excellent eye contact and a warm smile sustain engagement throughout. Her interest in helping companies navigate important decisions, paired with her involvement in Stanford Women and Athletes in Finance, creates a compelling IB narrative.

🎯 Next Rep: Vary vocal inflection to emphasize the experiences and industry interests that excite her most.